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A Shift from Black to White Palace Contrasts Marcos Jr.'s Admin with Duterte's Era

In a bold move, Malacañang has responded to Senator Imee Marcos' campaign advertisement, which described the current state of the country as black. According to Palace Press Officer Claire Castro, the color better suits the conditions during Rodrigo Duterte's presidency. In contrast, Castro portrayed President Ferdinand Marcos Jr.'s administration as striving for a white outcome.

The Palace official attributed the significant improvements in poverty rate and crime rate under Marcos Jr.'s administration compared to the previous one. Citing a 2024 report, she noted that the poverty incidence fell from 18.1% in 2021 to 15.5% in 2023.

Castro also highlighted the country's debt growth during Duterte's time, reaching P7.2 trillion. In response to Senator Marcos' claims of widespread hunger for justice, Castro pointed out the thousands killed during the war on drugs under Duterte's presidency.

The Palace official urged voters to be discerning when evaluating campaign advertisements and reminded them to seek truth over fake news. She emphasized that President Marcos Jr. is not in favor of negative campaigning.

This development comes as Senator Marcos officially confirmed Vice President Sara Duterte's endorsement, ending months of speculation about their relationship after the vice president cut ties with her brother, President Marcos.

Key Takeaways

The Palace has countered Senator Imee Marcos' campaign advertisement, describing the current state of the country as black.
Claire Castro portrayed President Ferdinand Marcos Jr.'s administration as striving for a white outcome.
The Philippines' poverty rate and crime rate have improved under Marcos Jr.'s administration compared to the previous one.
The Palace official urged voters to be discerning when evaluating campaign advertisements and reminded them to seek truth over fake news.

Insightful Analysis

As we analyze the current state of the country, it's clear that there are differing opinions on the best approach to move forward. While Senator Marcos' advertisement painted a bleak picture, the Palace sees progress under President Marcos Jr.'s administration. As professionals in 2025, we must remain vigilant and critically evaluate information to make informed decisions.

Recommendations

Be discerning When evaluating campaign advertisements or news reports, be sure to seek truth over fake news.
Stay informed Stay up-to-date on the latest developments and policy changes that may impact your work.
Focus on positivity As you write about the current state of your industry, focus on the positive developments and innovations that can drive growth.

Conclusion

As we navigate the complex landscape of politics and policy changes, it's essential to remain informed and discerning. By analyzing information critically and seeking truth over fake news, we can make informed decisions and drive progress in our respective fields. Let us strive for a white outcome by focusing on positivity, innovation, and growth.

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