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Israel's Top Court Hears Petitions Challenging the Sacking of Domestic Security Chief

The Israeli Supreme Court has commenced a hearing on the legality of dismissing Ronen Bar, the country's domestic security chief. The proceedings were interrupted by protests from both government supporters and critics, underscoring the controversy surrounding the decision.

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