EDSA A boulevard, not a highway

Transforming EDSA From Highway to Boulevard

The transformation of EDSA from a congested highway to a vibrant boulevard has far-reaching implications for the future of Philippine transportation. This iconic thoroughfare has become synonymous with frustrating traffic jams, inadequate pedestrian facilities, and narrow sidewalks that prioritize vehicular flow over human needs. However, recent announcements from Transportation Secretary Vince Dizon signaling a revamp of EDSA offer a glimmer of hope for a more commuter-friendly and people-centric urban environment.

In this blog post, we will delve into the reasons why transforming EDSA into a boulevard is crucial for creating a better future, where commuters can move safely and efficiently, and the needs of all users – pedestrians, cyclists, motorists, and public transportation users alike – are prioritized.

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Edward Lance Arellano Lorilla

CEO / Co-Founder

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